ext_9150 ([identity profile] salmon-pink.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] pikabot 2007-06-06 11:06 am (UTC)

Awww, so cute. Lovely look at Miss Goldenweek, and I liked the way you used the Devil's Fruit to explore her personality. Also, the comparison of child and adult feelings, and the idea that her childish feelings were more easily dismissed by others than an adult's feelings, was so bittersweet.

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