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Peter MacDonald ([personal profile] pikabot) wrote2010-03-10 04:13 pm
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OK so when Naruto finally finishes and I go write my massive Fix Everything AU where it doesn't suck?

Absolutely nothing from this part of the manga is getting in. Seriously. Not a single plot element. There is nothing here that is not completely stupid.
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[identity profile] georg-vanlunden.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, I take it you mean Shoulder-Face and Eye-Arm and Sasuke's abrupt turn towards friend-murdering ultra EEEEVIL?
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[personal profile] pikabot 2010-03-11 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeeeeah. Not to mention the ANBU Amateur Hour (because all highly trained professional killers discuss their incredibly simplistic plans out loud in a normal indoor speaking voice. And then are shocked when they get seen through) and...blech. Everything.

Except for maybe this page. That page is acceptable.
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